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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: No more crying

    No reason to cry. This thing’s no longer a life. That’s ended. No reason to cry. This thing’s no longer a life. That’s ended. Wait until we meet again, and ...

    Apr 8, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: bound to you

    life in your absence is but a hazy passing days leave amiss and the pain is longlasting the breath is brief the sweet now bitter frail as a leaf in ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Song in My Head

    Song in My Head A simple tune Playing in my head Over and Over. From a song Written long ago The words just slipping out of my mouth. And as ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i know people

    I know why people do bad things Do you I do People think that they have already Done bad Have they they must think they have SEE, people think they ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: As soon as he finds a new girl.......

    As soon as he finds a new girl… Guess where she’ll be? Flushed down the toilet… With all her broken dreams. He used her for another, That fact you cannot ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Broken Dreams

    Life does go on, as we knew it would. All the pain we took, for the greater good. All the lies we told, to those who care. For the love ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: vals

    Sometimes when we are holding GOD in are hands we don't think and just do we get over powered and we blink suddenly everything is on the floor we have ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I love you Dad

    My veins run cold, as my heart aches The pain I will always hold. The night you went out, I had no doubt, that you'd be back. I laughed, until ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Kill me (because our love hurts)

    You love to hurt people, it's what you do. It brings you so much pleasure, you hit me to relive your pressure. You kiss me so violently, you bruise my ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Same old story

    [Note: I'm not exactly sure where this belongs or if this is any good, so please tell me what you think!] Same old story Boy sees girl. Boy likes girl. ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: appraoching storm

    The storm has crept into my view I feel unsettled air The skies have darkened shades of blue; Winds take little care My earth does shake, my heart does race ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: untitled

    I'm tired of being compared to her. Her clothes are perfection, Her straight hair is pure gold, You watch as she passes. I watch from the side lines, I try ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Alone

    Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun, like an assassin ... who does it for fun. Two deafening blows in a war that has just ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Racism

    By my dad: Racism is a difficult topic. You say something wrong And you may get dropped quick. Quick as in fast, falling to the ground, and hitting the pavement ...

    Apr 7, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Final Performance of the Night

    Hey I just wrote this off the top of my head and I would like critiquers to help me with comma placement because I'm not very good at that, so ...

    Apr 6, 2008


You cannot have a positive life and a negative mind.
— Joyce Meyer